Tane's Surfing Story
Surfing in Hawaii
“Tane Tane,” whispered Dad, ”Wake up."
I got up and got dressed. Soon Dad and I walked down to the beach. We peered through the mountain of surfboards and there it was. Soon Dad found his surfboard. I saw a big set coming.
After we saw the big set we paddled out. Suddenly a wave crashed hard on my head. It felt sore.
Unexpectedly I saw a wave. As I paddled, I noticed that someone had all ready caught the wave. But I kept on going with my eyes closed. Finally I felt the wave forcing me forward. I stood up in a hurry, and I was riding it for real.
By Tane
Amazing writing, Tane I hope you did not wipe-out in the water.
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good writing Tane I liked it
ReplyDeleteHello Tane I liked your writing its to perfect
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