Check that we have got the 5-7-5 pattern correct
The
stars shine brightly
You
can see them in winter
And
share time with friends
Ashton & Tane
The
seven sisters
The
Matariki cluster
Stars
shining brightly
Peyton
& Isabella
Matariki
stars
Shine
in the night sky in June
The
seven sisters
Rohan
Stars
shining brightly
Means
a good harvesting year
To
grow fruit and veg
Aston
They
shine very bright
There
are seven of the stars
They
glow in the dark
Hannah
& Zoe
Stars
shining brightly
Matariki
families
Matariki
stars
Kobe
The
seven sisters
Are
the Matariki stars
In
the winter sky
Dallas
The
seven sisters
Matariki
is special
People
grow veges
Gemma
Fruit
and veges grow
In
the middle of winter
Matariki
falls
Dillan
People
plant veges
Matariki
is special
Families
celebrate
Kaprice
The
seven sisters
Shining
brightly in the sky
Matariki
stars
RJ
They
shine very bright
They
are a constellation
The Maori new Year
Bailie
Shining
in the sky
Matariki
is special
Stars
shining brightly
Christiaan
Matariki
shines
Brightly
in the winter sky
At
Maori New Year
Morgan
Each
June the stars rise
The
people plant their veges
They
are so pretty
Rohan
Matariki
is
A
time for celebration
And
eat yummy food
Kadin
A
man in a boat
Threw
pebbles into the sky
Making
stars shine bright
Ethan
A
long time ago
A
man in his waka rowed
Across
the dark sky
Kaea
Matariki
is
A
group of seven bright stars
In
the sky in June
Millie
& Charli
Matariki
shines
At
night in the winter sky
They
are eyes of God
Honey
& Ella
Matariki
sky
Is
a group of seven stars
Shining
in the dark
Charli
Pods 4 and 5 read your Haiku poems and we checked that you had the syllables right! Great haikus, you have worked hard at writing them.
ReplyDeleteHi Charli
ReplyDeleteShining is a great verb. We like the sentence "shining in the dark."
What other things did you do on Matariki day?
from Millie and Kobe