I am afraid that he will find me.
Running, I can hear him in the bushes scrambling furiously.
This is the "hook" for my next story.
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I like this video Ethan keep it up.This is a great story and a good start from kaea
ReplyDeleteI like this video of you Ethan its cool anyway this video this is the one of te best and I like this so so so so much keep it up Ethan its awesome
ReplyDeleteKia ora Ethan my name is Kadin.
ReplyDeleteI like the verbs scrambling furiously. What have you done in the rest of your story? It sounds exciting.
Kadin, pod7.
Kia ora Ethan
ReplyDeleteI really like your hook. It blows my head off I have a clear picture in my head. What are you going to do next in your story? It sounds exciting and a little bit scary. Well done.
From Tane
Greeting,s Ethan , Hannah here. I love your hook. Your mind is so sunny. I think your hook is good level 3 writing. What is your next learning? Do you have any goals you are working on?
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Hello pod7 and Ethan I like this video its perfect :]
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