RJ's Wonderful Writing - The Crash

The lights from the ambulance  lit up. Suddenly there was a big crash. I looked up. All the cars driving past the ambulance braked.

  The car  crumpled. On  the motorway some cars piled up. the wheels skidded and screeched. There were Injuries on people everyone was looking the windows were smashed and the bumper was taken off.  The car slammed into the wall and smashed.It was foggy. The people from the ambulance hopped out.They checked if the man was OK. 

The oil was pouring out. It was greasy. All the cars were beeping at the ambulance.

Heaps of big trucks were going past. The person was scared and confused. The wheels of the smashed car were popped. The other lights from the cars was shining. One of the  wheels rolled off the  car.  It was windy. The person was cold in the wind. We had to stop and when  the sign said “go” we drove past. They moved the car onto the truck  and while they were moving  the car the ambulance drove off and the person went to hospital.  

By RJ